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duinemerwen) wrote2019-08-12 10:25 pm
duinemerwen) wrote2019-08-12 10:25 pm
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20k progress report
To do:
one incomplete sex scene. I feel so awkward asking my friends to beta but it's got to be done
rewrite one subplot about what the big bad is doing while the protagonist is trapped in the time loop
revise exposition dump in first scene
expand most scenes somewhat, clear up awkward transitions, remove placeholder text, etc.
one incomplete sex scene. I feel so awkward asking my friends to beta but it's got to be done
rewrite one subplot about what the big bad is doing while the protagonist is trapped in the time loop
revise exposition dump in first scene
expand most scenes somewhat, clear up awkward transitions, remove placeholder text, etc.